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Thursday 22 November 2018

Spy Fox


    Hey guys welcome to another blog post I will be show you my writing that I have been doing with Miss D.


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        • The world was beautiful and nice and hot.
        • The sea was blue and the penguins floated happily on there iceberg. There was a small family of penguins. A mum, penguin a baby penguin and a dad penguin. As the penguin floated down the iceberg,

        • Magically a laser apperted and the iceberg exploded. The iceberg disappeared before our eyes.
        • All the way on the other side of the world,

        • Spy Fox and Lily were ready to have a romantic date. As lily passed Spy fox his first glass of wine, his watch flicked on. Time for a mission

        • Spy fox was going to a place could Sardines because spy fox wanted to see what was in there. Spy fox found a hole that he can go thore. Spy fox was walking in the hole that he found. The cat said to the spyfox push the big red button because it might stop the hole machine that was going before. Spy fox and the cat was running out of the building to get in the car and drive back.

        • Because the timer was counting down from 2:00. The the timer ran out. Spy fox and the cat was in the car then they had a laer on there car and spy fox and the cat laerd the building that they were in. And the larer shot the building and the hole thing blowed up.

        • I hope you guys like my blog post that I have done you guys to see for you. I hope you can comment on my blog post that I have done for you. I really want people to comment on my blog because It is really nice of people to comment on my blog. Thank you I hope you really like my blog post.

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