This is my black of my death from my work i have done today because I wanna sheare what I have been doing. This my is my best work I have done. And i have finshed my work before the class has finshed. There you go what I have made.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, 12 April 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful- how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Jessica I just wanted to say that you should add a bit more on your writing because people don't really understand what you have been working on. But you did your best which is really good to know.
ReplyDeleteGood work just a bit to short
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