Inspired Writing
For writing we have been learning to increase the vocabulary in our writing. Our task was to get a picture and write our sentences using and describing what is happening in the picture. We had to then highlight what changes we made in each sentence.
There was clouds.
The clouds was pretty and it was a nice sun shine it was so so pretty because it has pretty colors.
They reminded me that it was a really hot day and the sun was so bright the sun was behind the clouds.
I can see clouds,footpath,water, flowers.
Good,Happy, Sad,anger
I rate myself a R3 because it is a really good chose because I work on these writing and I need to work on more to get higher. For me this is a really good one to chose from. I really enjoy writing about this.
Here is the picture of my writing.
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