Today we are doing a blog post because it is our art that we are doing today. My group has two bully's and three nice people in my group and the two bully's are sapphire and lily the three good people the three people are kahciar makenzie and me. And me and they are playing on the on the playground. Because it was really cool to play on the playground and the bully's came along and the came and pushed me kahciar and Mackenzie of the playground.
The feedback that we got was.
We liked how you labled the people so we can see whos, who .
You could probably do your handwriting a little bit better.
we like the way that you drew the props so that we can see what they are.
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